World of Monochrome - Preview

So yeah, for anyone who remembers the silly one panel I made not too long ago, I've been working on an AU fic of Mogeko/Deep Sea Prisoner's "The Gray Garden", and unlike last time I actually have decided on an official title now - World of Monochrome. Geddit...because it's the opposite of a "Gray" "Garden", hahahahaaaa...

As you can see, this is only a preview, and a rewrite of an actual scene in the game to boot. I have yet to fully plan out the story scene by scene in its entirety, hence this is another word barf of sorts. You'll also notice the different style I've made this whole thing in. You remember how back when I announced my Ib fanfic (gosh I have too many half finished ideas...), I said I wanted to try to write in the style of a Walfas light novel? This is exactly what I meant - a normal prose but with pictures added in after every few breaks and paragraphs.

Tell me what you think of the style, or what I actually wrote!

(And don't ask why they are eating slices of 'pizza'...I forgot to recolor them by the time I uploaded this)