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Kigurou-Enkou Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015  Student Writer
Okay, that's it, you've made me angry.

Are you the writer of this story? Can you tell ME what *I* should do? Do you have the right to tell ME what to write? No! Criticizing is one thing, TELLING me how to write it to fulfill YOUR own selfish whims is another!

Besides, you are NOT giving Rein any credit as a character at ALL. I deliberately didn't reveal anything about her so you wouldn't understand why she had to do what she has to do. So it is NOT fair for you to judge her like that. What did I say to you ONLY A FEW HOURS AGO? That she's a shinigami, and killing people IS HER JOB. You cannot expect her to be a villain just for that, nor do you have ANY right to tell ME that she should be killed or whatever. It only reflects poorly on you - You are making yourself look stupid and shallow for judging the characters so IRREVERENTLY and think you're somehow a hero for it. That is what Makoto is doing and that is NOT THE RIGHT THING TO DO.

Look, I know you get hyper about things, but if that hyperness is going to make you SPIT AT MY STORY like that, then I kindly suggest you be quiet and not comment at all. You have no right to tell me, the writer, that I made a 'poor choice' in the writing of my story when you haven't even written a single thing from experience to prove me otherwise, got it?
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Nefer007 Featured By Owner 13 hours ago  Student Traditional Artist
yoyoyoyoyo
chill the frick out
just chill
stick a baby in there, that'll calm some stuff down
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Kigurou-Enkou Featured By Owner 5 hours ago  Student Writer
K
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Nefer007 Featured By Owner 13 hours ago  Student Traditional Artist
*just a random, child youkai*
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